Pitch Feedback

We presented our pitch to our class and both of our teachers. They were pleased with the detail put into our presentation in terms of our generic and trailer conventions which we included a lot of information for our class to know specifically. But our teachers pointed out that we have not included the characters and the actors portrayed in the film, which we will be starting on. They also said that we need to consider character development so the audience understand the characteristics and behaviour of our characters during the course of the film.We included the majority of areas such as; USP, Production Company Logo, Plotlines, Characters, Settings, Generic conventions, Trailer conventions, Poster and Magazine Cover, Title and Connotations and Target Audience whereas in our 'Trophy Room' pitch feedback we primarily focused on the plot and narratives because it we had that information in depth. Ms Twydell and Ms Bobbett also said that we announced the name for the title quite late into our pitch because there was wondering what it was in the first place to get an idea of our title is associated with our crime genre film. The title of our is going to be called 'Payne' because some crime films/TV shows have the name of the main character as the title such as 'Dexter' and 'Luther'.